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Drafting: Show What’s Happening Inside You

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Grade 4

English

Drafting: Show What’s Happening Inside You

Adding internal dialogue changes everything for the reader. When our narrator hesitates to touch the envelope, thinking "It’s going to say, 'She is nothing like her sister,'" we instantly uncover deep fear, pressure, and vulnerability that physical actions alone can never fully show.

Drafting: Show What’s Happening Inside You

Can we make the language simpler for 4th grades