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The Boy and the Whale: Reading Response Prompts

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The Boy and the Whale: Reading Response Prompts

Student Choice Reading Response: The Boy and the Whale

Directions: Choose one of the two prompts below to complete your reading response. Make sure to clearly state your main claim (your answer) and include at least two strong details from the text to support your thinking.


Option 1: Character Analysis (Traits & Motivation)

In The Boy and the Whale, what character trait best describes the boy when he decides to help the tangled whale?
  • Step 1: State your claim by naming a trait that describes the boy (for example: brave, caring, or determined).
  • Step 2: Give Detail 1 from the story showing what the boy thought, felt, or did.
  • Step 3: Give Detail 2 from the story showing another action or feeling that supports your claim.
  • Step 4: Explain how your two details prove your claim.
Sentence Starters (Optional):
  • In The Boy and the Whale, the boy shows that he is ____________ because...
  • One detail from the text that proves this is when...
  • Another detail from the story is when...
  • These details show that the boy is ____________ because...


Option 2: Character Change (Feelings & Actions)

How do the father's feelings and actions toward his son or the whale change from the beginning of the story to the end?
  • Step 1: State your claim by explaining how the father changes from the start of the story to the end.
  • Step 2: Give Detail 1 from the text showing how the father felt or acted at the beginning.
  • Step 3: Give Detail 2 from the text showing how the father felt or acted at the end.
  • Step 4: Explain what caused the father's feelings to change.
Sentence Starters (Optional):
  • At the beginning of the story, the father feels ____________, but by the end, he changes and feels ____________.
  • In the beginning, the father shows this when...
  • By the end of the story, the father changes because...
  • This shows the father changed from ____________ to ____________.

The Boy and the Whale: Reading Response Rubric

4-Point Reading Response Rubric: The Boy and the Whale

Use this rubric to assess student constructed responses for either prompt option (Option 1: Character Analysis or Option 2: Character Change).
Criteria
4 - Exemplary
3 - Proficient
2 - Developing
1 - Beginning
Claim / Focus
4 pts - Clear & Insightful Directly answers the prompt with a clear, specific claim naming a character trait or clearly explaining how the father changes.
3 pts - Clear & Complete Answers the prompt with a clear claim naming a trait or describing the change.
2 pts - Incomplete / Vague Gives a weak or partial claim that only partly answers the prompt.
1 pt - Missing / Incorrect Does not state a claim or does not answer the prompt question.
Text Evidence (Two Details)
4 pts - Strong & Accurate Includes two specific, accurate details from the story that directly support the claim.
3 pts - Sufficient Evidence Includes two details from the story, but one may be somewhat general or brief.
2 pts - Limited Evidence Includes only one detail from the story, or the details are vague.
1 pt - Little to No Evidence Missing text details, or details are inaccurate and off-topic.
Explanation & Reasoning
4 pts - Thorough & Clear Clearly explains in own words how both details prove the claim or explain the character change.
3 pts - Understandable Explains how the details connect to the claim, though the reasoning may be simple.
2 pts - Weak Connection Retells story events without clearly explaining how they prove the claim.
1 pt - No Explanation Does not explain how the text details connect to the claim.
Conventions & Sentences
4 pts - Fluent & Clear Written in complete sentences with correct capitalization, end marks, and easy-to-read spelling.
3 pts - Mostly Clear Written in mostly complete sentences with minor errors that do not confuse the reader.
2 pts - Inconsistent Frequent incomplete sentences (run-ons or fragments) and spelling or punctuation mistakes.
1 pt - Hard to Read Errors in sentence structure, punctuation, and spelling make the writing difficult to understand.


Quick Scoring Guide

  • Total Points Possible: 16 Points
Total Points
Performance Level
Description
15 – 16
Level 4
Exceeds standard; comprehensive response with rich text support.
12 – 14
Level 3
Meets standard; complete response with two clear text details.
8 – 11
Level 2
Approaching standard; needs stronger text support or explanation.
Below 8
Level 1
Below standard; requires teacher support and re-teaching.


Prompt-Specific Look-Fors

  • Option 1 (Boy's Traits): Look for a clear trait (such as brave, compassionate, caring, or determined), supported by details such as looking into the whale's eye, sensing its fear, and jumping into the cold ocean with a knife to cut the ropes.
  • Option 2 (Father's Change): Look for a clear contrast between the beginning (worried about danger and saving their only fishing net) and the end (proudly hugging his shivering son and admiring his bravery as the whale leaps free).