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Feedback for Programming Joke Submission
Writing Feedback
Year 2
English
Feedback for Programming Joke Submission
Strengths
Topic Choice: You picked a very popular theme in the coding world. Most people who work with computers will get what you are trying to say. This was a good choice for the assignment.
Areas for Growth
Joke Logic: The joke is meant to be a pun on binary numbers. In binary, the number two is written as '10'. Using the word 'three' makes the punchline lose its meaning. It confuses the reader.
Spelling and Grammar: You have a few typos like 'understant' and you are missing punctuation. These small errors distract the reader from the humor of your joke.
Next Steps
Fix the Pun: Change the number three to '10'. This makes the joke work because '10' looks like the number ten but actually means two in binary. It is the key to the whole pun.
Check Spelling: Use a spell checker or read your work slowly to find small mistakes. Be sure to capitalize the start of your sentence to make it look professional.
Grade/Score
6/10
Inline Annotations
Excerpt | Annotation |
|---|---|
"understant" | This should be spelled 'understand'. |
"dont" | You need an apostrophe here to make the word 'don't'. |
Rewrite Suggestions
Original | Rewritten | Explanation |
|---|---|---|
"there are three types of people in the world..those who understant binary and those who dont" | "There are 10 types of people in the world: those who understand binary and those who don't." | This fixes the logic of the joke and corrects the spelling errors. |